On this page, students can find out the common mistakes in Analytical Paragraph writing. The analytical paragraph is a new topic that was added to CBSE class 10 English to improve students’ analytical skills. But due to a lack of proper guidance and knowledge, some common errors in the analytical paragraph were observed by essayshout teachers and have been presented here for you to learn from others’ mistakes.
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- Talking about the introduction first- do not write the word ‘above or below’ in the answer.
- When you are writing about a range of years, you can’t use ‘in’. Instead write ‘from or across’.
- The colour of the bars is not to be mentioned while writing an analytical paragraph. It’s for you to observe the graph.
- ‘purchasing of the computer’- your sentence making is wrong. Write correct and meaningful sentences.
- ‘Smartphones THEN computers’ while comparing two objects use the correct word- than.
- than- तुलना में and then- तब
- ‘snap up of computers’- I could not understand this line.
- Do not use personal pronouns- I, we etc.
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Learn from others’ mistakes and score full marks while writing analytical paragraph answers.
- The word count is less than required. You must write between 100 and 120 words.
- It’s not RISHINAGAR; correct is RISHUNAGAR.
- ‘suddenly dropped sharply’, suddenly is not the right word here and its spelling is also incorrect.
- Do not give space before putting a comma. A comma is put directly after the word.
- ‘a increase’ is wrong, it must be written as ‘an increase’.
- Abbreviations can be accepted in Maths but not in English. Never write i.e. or e.g. etcetera in English exam.
- Bhumika just wrote the general analysis. Include some statistics like, rose by 10% or reduced by half.
- Watch this video to know the keywords to write the correct analytical paragraph answers.
- Essayshout gives you 3 out of 5 marks for this analytical paragraph answer.
- Better luck next time.