Today, social media has penetrated every field of our life. Some avail its endless benefits while some especially teenagers get lost in its fast and wide flow. Let’s see how you can express your opinion by writing a letter to editor on social media and youth.
Social Networking Sites have become the Latest Fad- Letter to Editor about Social Media
Q8 Social networking sites have become the latest fad among school-going children. The craze has a very bad impact on youngsters. Considering its gravity, you want to express your concern by writing a letter to the editor of the Hindustan Times in about 100-120 words. You are Nitish/Natasha of H. No. 123/8, Sant Nagar, New Delhi – 110065.
| 123/8, Sant Nagar New Delhi – 110065 20th March, 20XX The Editor The Hindustan Times New Delhi Subject: Craze for social networking sites among youngsters Respected sir/madam Through the column of your prestigious newspaper, I want to highlight my concern about teenagers’ growing interest in social networking. From pings and chat windows to pokes and emoticons, everything exists to bring people closer. It helps to learn new things, make new friends, explore new opportunities and develop new perspectives. But every coin has two sides. Its vastness can lead to children reaching dangerous or adult websites. Cyberbullying is another growing trend. Similarly, spending too much time on it can often lead to social media addiction, which can affect the ability to develop strong interpersonal relationships. Teenagers are at a vulnerable age and the avalanche of information can be overwhelming. The only solution to this is vigilant parents who must ensure moderate use of social media, ensuring that it is a boon and not a bane. Yours faithfully Nitish |
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120 3/8, sant Nagar
New Delhi
February 18, 2021
The editor
Hindustan Times
Sir
Subject: Bad impact of social media on youngsters.
Through the column of your newspaper I would like to indicate that school going children has been bad impact by using social networking sites.
We all know that internet can become a boon or bane for us depending on which side of the coin we choose. The craze has a bad impact on youngsters. Excess using of of internet and social networking sites leads to take a wrong step by school children. Nowadays, few of them are involved in harmful activities like some of them are becoming drug smugglers, some of them are becoming gangsters, etc. Many of the youngsters are addicted to alcohol which spoils their life and career.They are not even willing to study or do homework because they spend all their time in social media and forgot about their studies.
I would like to request you to please publish this newspaper so that the concerned authority can take steps towards this problems as quickly as possible.
Yours faithfully
Nutan
Essayshout gives you 3.5 marks.
1.Corrections- ‘Through the COLUMNS …..has been badly impacted by….sites.
2. Try to give reasons for their indulgence in wrong activities. For example- People show off drinking alcohol as something of high status that misleads the youth.
3. Why they become smuggler and gangster?
4. Good! Keep it up..
When you are writing The Editor then E will always capital
You are right Himanshu Kumar.
H. No. 123/8 , Sant Nagar
New Delhi
15th February 2021
To the editor
Hindustan Times Office
New Delhi
Subject:- Bad impact of social media on youngsters.
Through the columns of your esteemed newspaper, I Nutan would like to draw the attention of common people towards the bad impact of social media on youngsters.
In today’s world everyone is taking various advantages of social networking sites. Social media and internet is no doubt, boon to the mankind but it has bad impacts too. Specifically talking about the youngsters, they are addicted to these sites. They are not even willing to study or do homework because they spend all their time in social media and forget about their studies. Usage of these addictive games, social media websites, apps are not only making them lazy but worsening their performance in academics too.
I would like to request your kind self, to publish this important topic and bring it in discussion through your esteemed newspaper and help me to spread awareness among the people.
Yours sincerely,
Nutan
Essayshout gives you 4 out of 5 marks.
1. Don’t mention your name in the body part.
2. You have taken into consideration only the academic part. You could have included- spending money to show off, inspired by the fashion industry and celebrities, expect to lead the life like celebrities, getting trapped in misleading advertisements etc.
3. Don’t stretch a single point.
H number 123/8
sn15 Sant Nagar
Delhi
6 February 2021
To the editor
Hindustan Times
New Delhi
subject; impact of social networking sites on children
Sir,
I am a regular reader of your newspaper through the columns of your esteemed and widely read newspaper. I would like to to highlight the impact of social networking sites on every generation. Social networking is a boon for the society. These have become the latest fad for school going children. But this craze Croma addiction has a a very bad impact on the youngsters. They live a mirror life one for themselves and 14 outer world. This seemed to have low self esteem. They have confidence issues. They become unsociable and live in a total virtual world. Where their emotions are controlled by the comments of other people.though there are many Bros of social networking sites. Some of them are you are connected to your friend thousands of miles away from you within a click you made talk to many people in an instant to anyone. You can socialize with people of different mindsets. You can follow your interest and make your views important. Like a coin everything has it good as well bad side. Its upon the user which one to see and accept. I request you to publish this letter with some relevant photographs and to spread awareness among the fellow readers.
Yours Faithfully
Nutan
Error Analysis:
1. Essayshout gives you 3.5 marks.
2. Pay attention to the word limit.
3. Avoid unnecessary lines- ‘I am a regular…newspaper.’
4. I don’t know what is croma addiction.
5. Pros of Social media and not Bros.
6. I feel like it has been copied from somewhere.
You are saying avoide unnecessary line but they are much important lines
Those lines may be important, but you need to write within the allowed word limit. Otherwise, the examiner would give you marks on the basis of the first 120 words and would leave the remaining part unread.