The present generation is well updated in the use of the internet and computers. Let’s look at the data arising out of a recent survey that was done to ascertain the time spent on the utilisation of the computer and internet for varied purposes. Write an analytical paragraph for the above bar chart in 100-120 words.
It is a sample question on analytical paragraph writing for class 10 to improve writing and analysing skills. You should first write your own answer, then self check with our sample answer given below.
Analytical Paragraph Class 10 CBSE Format/Example
To score full marks it is important that you follow the right format while writing an analytical paragraph in your exams. Students are asking- What is the format of an analytical paragraph? CBSE has prescribed the following format to write an analytical paragraph for class 10.
- It should be written in a single paragraph containing 100-120 words only.
- Paraphrasing
- use of appropriate functional language (more/less/ increase/ decrease/stable etc.) to achieve cohesion-
- accuracy in analysis- at least 4 clearly identified trends
- conclusion
- 3 marks for content and 2 marks for Expression
Analytical Paragraph Sample Answer 1
The bar graph illustrates the time spent on the utilisation of computer and internet. It was observed in a recent survey that 50% of the population use the internet and computer every day. The usage includes academic, personal, official and leisure activities. The usage pattern of the e-mail was also illustrated. The maximum usage accounts for approximately 58% which is equal for official work and for leisure activity. Academic activities are successful in attracting only 8-9% of students once in a month. E-mail is still not the common medium for written communication. To conclude, 5% of people never use a computer and related activities besides its popularity and usefulness.
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Analytical Paragraph Sample Answer 2
The bar graph illustrates the time spent on the utilisation of the computer and the internet by people in a month.
According to the survey, all five usage reasons – academics, personal use, e-mail access, work, and leisure – witness at least 50% daily activity. It was observed that almost everyone use these facilities at least once a month for leisure, with 30% saying they use them once a week. The data revealed that people use computers for work at least once and very few (less than 10%) never used e-mail. Computer and the internet for academic reasons on a daily basis are used by 50% of students and over 20% stated doing so 2-3 times a week. There were only 2% who never used these services for academics.
In short, it can be stated that the internet and computer are slowly penetrating every field of life.
The given bar graph is a comparative study that was conducted to ascertain the time spent on utilization of the internet for various activities. Exactly 50% surveyees utilize the computer for academic purposes everyday, while we observe a steady decline to just abut 3% who said they never used it for that purpose. Email is also used by exactly 50% individuals everyday, while around 2% never use it. For personal use, around 52% sureveyees use their computer everyday which witnesses an unsteady decline to about 5% who never use it for personal use. A towering 58% individuals use the internet for work everyday and no one in the survey said otherwise. For leisure purposes, an equivalent 58% individuals have opted for everyday usage while only about 1% never use it. All in all, we can say that the youth is well acquainted with the internet.
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In this technologically bounded world , people waste their valuable time on social media . The pie chart illustrates the percentage of social media users of different age groups . The largest social media users in India belongs to age group between 13- 25 . The youngsters of this age group are mainly indulge in seeking academic helps . The people of above age of 55 uses the social media the least . The second largest proportion of social media users belong to age group between 26 -35 . there is huge gap between the age group 26 – 35 and 36 – 45 in using social media . In the nutshell people of younger are using social media more as compared to older people .
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The bar graph shows the performance of students in the terminal examination . The students have showed improvement in the second term . The students have increased their performance in all the subjects except in Hindi . The marks of students in Hindi dropped about 10% in comparison with first term to second term .The performance of students have been good in Maths in both the terms . In Maths students have increased their marks from about 90% to 95% . In subjects like Maths, Science, Sst an increment of 5% is seen in second term .The performance of students in English have only shown a little increment of about 2% to 3% . In the nutshell it should be concluded that students are good in problem solving subjects like Maths but a sincere hardwork is required in the language subjects like English and Hindi .
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The bar graph illustrates the time spent on utilisaition of the computers and internet for the varied purposes.Every activity shows a sharp decline in percentage of users using internet and computers from everyday scenario to 2-3 days a week. On daily basis,most of the people nearly 60% use internet for work and leisure.Maximum people checks their email and use internet for work once in 2-3 days..Academic activities accounts for approximately 10% people who utilize computer for the same in once a month In contrast to all other activities there is no one who had never used the internet for work.In a Nutshell,use of Internet is quite high than that of computers and internet has become an important tool for everybody to complete their work.
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2nd sentence and conclusion are contradictory.
Now a days , In this technologically bounded world, people spend their most of the time on computer and internet for varied purposes. The given bargraph shows the time spent by the people on computer and internet for varied purposes. About 60% humans utilize computer everyday for official work and leisure activities. About 50% students use internet for academic activities .
The bargraph also illustrates that people have to use internet for their office work very often .50% people use internet for written communication everyday . the rest 50% people not use e mail very rampant. In the nutshell I conclude that people should minimize the browsing activities for leisure work .
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The bar graph depicts the time spent in the utilization of computers an internet by the people for various actives.
It can be observed that everyday, 50% people use computers for academic activities whereas more than 50% people use it for their personal use. There are only 3-5% of the total people who have never used computers not only for academic work but also not for their personal use. When it comes to the usage of internet the graphs peaked. Nearly, 59% people use internet for work and also the same number of the people use internet for spending their leisure time everyday. There is no one who have never used internet for work or for leisure. Not only this, half of the people use e-mails regularly. The people who use computers internet and e-mails 2-3 days in a week fluctuates between 20-30%. The people who use it once in a week fluctuates between 10-20% whereas people who use them once in a month constitutes not even 10% of the population.
Overall more than half of the population likes to use computers internet and e-mails everyday, and internet is more popular among users. There is nobody who haven’t used it.
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What is actives? Variour ACTIVITIES.
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Introduction-
The above bar graph illustrates the time spent on the utilization of the computer and internet for academic, official, personal and entertainment activities.
Body-
It is observed that people spend most of their time on the internet for all of the activities mentioned for around 50-60% everyday. People tend to spend an equal time for all the activities for about 20-30% of 2-3 days a week. Some people rarely use the internet once in a blue moon, as less than 10% once a month to check on all the activities and the least time for leisure purpose. Hardly 2-3% of people seldom make use of the internet.
Conclusion-
In a nutshell, most of the people spend half an hour on internet on a daily basis, the usage of internet varies significantly in terms of time, age-group and requirements.
Error Analysis:
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2. do not mention- introduction…body..conclusion..
3. Write either ‘Rarely’ or ‘Once in a blue moon’. Some people use the internet once in a blue moon only.
4. Similarly, ‘Hardly’ and ‘Seldom’ mean the same.
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The pie chart illustrates that the present generation is well versed with use of computer and internet.
It was observed that 50% is the highest percentage of the every day usuers of computer and internet.The usage includes for acedmic activities,personal usage,for work, for lesiure. There is a huge decline in the poplulation of those people who had never used internet.people who uses internet and computers twice or thrice in a week remains constant.
In short it can be stated thst the internet and computers are slowly penetrating in every feild of life.
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