Today, you will learn how to write an analytical paragraph from a data table. Here, students are not given any chart or graphic representation.
Q With the help of the given table, write an analytical paragraph in about 100-120 words on ‘Rising Prices’.
| Food items | Feb, 18 | Feb,19 | Feb,20 | Feb,21 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Groundnut Oil (per litre) | 85 | 101 | 121 | 121 |
| Rice (per kg) | 20 | 25 | 28 | 30 |
| Flour (per kg) | 18 | 25 | 28 | 35 |
| Tour dal (per kg) | 45 | 56 | 69 | 75 |
Analytical Paragraph for Class 10
The table shows a comparative study of staple food items over three years, from February 2018 to January 2021.
According to the given data, the prices have been rising steeply. Flour prices have almost doubled in just three years. Tour daal prices showed almost a two-third hike in prices. Rice rates increased by 50%. Groundnut oil recorded the least rising speed of around 45%. Skyrocketing prices of oil and Tour daal make it unfit for a poor family’s kitchen budget.
To summarize, a hike in basic food prices means the poor can’t afford even one square meal. The government must control the prices of essential commodities.
The recent pandemic has had an adverse effect on every facet of life. ‘Young Minds’ conducted a survey to show how the mental health of young people has been affected during this time. 2,111 young people took part in the survey which shows how the lockdown is not only impacting jobs and the economy but also mental health. Write an interpretation in 100-120 words on how lockdown in the times of COVID-19 has affected the mental health of young people.
The doughnut chart clearly illustrates how the mental health of young people has been affected during the pandemic. This data was recorded in a survey conducted by Young Minds.
It is evident from the given doughnut chart that nearly 15% of people’s mental health was not affected during the lockdown. Whereas, approximately 27% of people feel much worse when compared with their pre-lockdown mental health. A striking 45% of people feel a bit worse. On the contrary, 10% feel a bit better. Interestingly, only 3% of people felt that their mental health has become substantially better.
In a nutshell, nearly 72% of people felt that their mental health has gotten worse during the lockdown. But in the opposite case, around 13% of people felt that the lockdown had a positive impact on their mental health. This shows us the probable number of people who might be suffering from mental health issues and raises awareness of it.
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The above table shows the rising prices of food and oil crops. It can be inferred that the prices has increased from feb 2018-feb 2021. the price of groundnut was only 85 in 18 but enormously increased in 21. Not only ground the prices of rice,flour and tour dal has also increased. In 2018 the price of rice was 20 but increased in 21. The price of flour was only in 18 but increased to 35 in 21. The price of tour dal was 45 in 18 but increased in 21. At last we can conclude that the prices of essential goods are increasing year by year and indian economy is continuously decreasing
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The given table depicts the prices of various food items on February 18th ,19th,20th and 21st. The price of a liter of Groundnut oil rose to Rs 101 from Rs 85 and remained stagnant for the next two days at Rs.121. The price of rice escalated by 25% and further skyrocketed to 50% by February 21st . Cost of 1kg of flour nearly doubled by February 21st. In a nutshell, an increase can be depicted in the prices of various food items within 4 days. Government must take stern actions to reduce this inflation in food items for the welfare of all.
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In the conclusion, is it okay to write personal opinions. Or what you wrote doesn’t count as one? I’m confused. I read somewhere it’s not appropriate to write your personal opinions and that it is advised to stick to the information given.
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The given table shows us the prices of food items in three years from Feb 2018-21.This table shows that the prices of food items increases continuously from year 2018.The price of flour has almost increases double in year 2021.Groundnut prices increases from rupee 85 to 121.Groundnut prices has not increases in the year 2021.The food items whose prices has least increases are dal and rice.Increase in prices in food make it difficult for poor to buy it and they are not able to attain proper nutrition .So our government should look at this problem and try to solve it
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The table shown above depicts the increasing prices of commodities used in daily basis. it can be inferred that in three years from Feb 18 to 21 prices of commodities have shown significant increment. price of Groundnut oil(per litre) has enormously increased from 85 to 121rupees but has been constant in subsequent years. The price of rice did not show any rapid increase relatively than other commodities. however the price of rice has shown 50% increase. in contrast the price of flour almost doubled within three years but was same as rice during Feb 20. it is important to observe that price of tour dal has shown a big leap in increase from 45 to 75 rupees. Overall it can be concluded that this increment in prices is not a good sign for the economy especially for the poor people who struggle for even one square meal. intervention of government in this aspect is necessary.
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The table above illustrates the prices of commodities used in every household on a daily basis. It depicts the data from year 2018 to 2021. It is observed that the price of Groundnut strikingly increased from 85 to 121 in the span of three years, a similar trend has been seen in the prices of tours dal which went up by 30 rupees in 3 years (45-75). In contrast to this, the price of rice per kg increased from 20 in 2018 to 25 in 2019 and finally 30 in 2021. Likewise, the price of flour almost doubled up from 18 in 2018 to 35 on 2021.In a nutshell, it could be concluded that the price of all these good is increasing day-by-day and there will be no decline in successive years
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The given table depicits the information about the prices of food item from Feb 2018 to feb 2021.
It is evident from the table that the prices of all food items are increasing as year passes by. It is observed that the price of flour is doubled in just three years .while the price of tur dal is rose by 60%. similarly,an increment of 50% in price of rice is also been observed however, groundnut does not show any huge gap between the prices in three years.
Overall, it can be said that groundnut is the most expensive food item which is rupees 121 in the year 2021 whereas, the price of tur dal is rupees 75 which is comparatively cheapest.
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The given table depicts the hike in the prices of certain essential food items over 4 consecutive years between 2018 and 2021.
Over the years, the cost of groundnut oil per litre spiked up the most as opposed to any other commodity on the list. On the contrary, the increase percentage of cost of per kg of rice was recorded to be the least. The increase rate of cost/kg for rice was 25% on the year 2019 but it dropped to 12% the following year. Prices of flour showed a similar trend.
The price of groundnut oil per litre was stagnant in the year 2021. Notably, the prices of rice and flour per kg increased uniformly from ₹25 -₹ 75 per kg through the years.
Overall the prices of all essential commodities have been on the rise. It is also evident from the table that the prices of rice doubled over the 4 years.
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This table depicts the rise in prices of various eatables from Feb, 18 to Jan, 21.There is a lot of increase in the prices in Feb, 19 as compared to that of Feb, 18.Prices of groundnut oil increased from 85 to 121 between Feb, 18 – Jan, 21. The price of rice increased from 20 to 30 in between these years. The price of flour has become almost double in Jan, 21.The price of tour dal has also shown a significant rise. Overall, it can be concluded that the prices of each and every thing of daily use are increasing day by day.
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The given table represents the rising prices of daily groceries. The table shows the prices o of items between 18 feburary to 21 feburary. The price of groundnut ( per liter )on 18 Feb was 85 which suddenly increases to 121 on 21 Feb. The maximum cost of rice and flour is 30 and 35 per kg respectively. The maximum price of tour dal is 75 per kg. The difference between the price of groundnut (per kg) between 18 feb to 21 feb is Rs 36 .The cost of rice and flour is same on 19 feb and 20 feb is 25 and 28 respectively. Hence , groundnut had the highest cost in compare to all other products
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The table states the rising food prices of specific food items. The data reveals the cost of food rising from Feb 18 till 21. The highest cost is of the groundnut oil( per liter whereas the lowest cost is of the flour per kg. In later stages, the cost remains highest of the groundnut. on the other hand, it changes the lowest cost changes from flour to rice. There is a huge gap between the prices of tour dal ( per kg). The prices remain constant of groudnut oil on Feb 20 till a 21. Overall, in the future, the highest cost would be groundnut rather than rice.
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