What is Analytical Paragraph Class 10 CBSE?
While writing an analytical Paragraph, students are expected to analyse and write in words the information that is presented in the form of a line chart, bar graph, table or pie chart. It requires them to observe the given information and write it in words not exceeding 120.
Given below is an Analytical paragraph Class 10 solved example to help students score 5 out of 5 marks in their board exams. Don’t skip the error analysis in the comments below. Unlike past years CBSE has uploaded all subjects’ sample papers for classes 10 and 12 on its official site at the beginning of the academic session itself. You can fully solved class 10 English sample paper 2023-24 here.
Sample Question: Analytical Paragraph
The line graph below shows changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand since 1901 and forecasts until 2101. Analyse the graph and write your observations in a paragraph of 100-120 words. Do not add any extra information.
Analytical paragraph Class 10 – solution 1
The line graph shows changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand since 1901 and forecasts until 2101.
Between 1901 and the present day, the birth rate has been consistently higher than the death rate. It stood at 20,000 at the start of this period and increased to a high of 66,000. Since then the rate has varied between 65 to 50 thousand and it is expected to decline slowly to around 45,000 births. On the contrary, the death rate started below 10,000 and increased steadily until the present time. This increase is expected to be faster between 2021 and 2051 when the rate will probably level off at around 60,000, before dropping slightly in 2101.
To conclude, these opposing trends mean that the death rate might overtake the birth rate around 2041 and the huge difference between the two levels may reverse after that.
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Analytical paragraph Class 10- solution 2
The line graph shows changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand since 1901 and forecasts until 2101.
Starting from the year 1901 both birth and death rates are increasing. After the year 1941 birth rate increased by more than double. While there was a sudden rise in the death rate after 2001 that is expected to continue till the year 2051. After which it might stabilise or record a slight fall after 2081. The birth rate witnessed many ups and downs from 1961 to 2001. it is assumed to fall continuously after 2021.
It can be concluded that the population of New Zealand is expected to decline as the death rate will overtake the birth rate after the year 2041.
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Analytical paragraph Class 10 – solution 2
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The graph given above provides information about the birth rate and death rate in New Zealand from 1901 till 2101. The diagram illustrates that from 1901 the birth rate keeps increasing at an incredible speed till 1941. The birth rate started fluctuating and falling since 1941.
On the other hand, the death rate keeps fluctuating till 2001. The birth rate was at a peak in 1961 and the death rate in 2061. In comparison to the birth rate death rate rapidly rises from 2021 and the birth rate gradually decreased. In short, the population seems to be balanced from 1961 and it is good otherwise we know the consequences of overpopulation.
It can be concluded from the graph that the death rate can overtake the birth rate after 2041.
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The given line graph illustrates the birth rates and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101. The birth rate remained stagnant between 20 and 30 until 1941. Further, the birth rate escalated to 75, the highest at 1961. From 1901, death rate rose slowly yet significantly until 2001. From 2001, death rate skyrocketed to nearly 35% by 2021. Both death rate and birth rate crossed 50% at 2041 and hence, achieving demographic equilibrium. It is speculated that death rate will reach 60% by 2061 and remain stagnant until 2101. To conclude, it is anticipated that death rate will surpass birth rate by 2061 which would lead to a decrease in population in New Zealand.
Error Analysis:
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Corrections needed-
This sentence is wrong- ‘Both death rate and birth rate crossed 50% at 2041’- 2041 is yet to come. So, you can write- expected or forecasted to cross 50% in 2041.
At 2041 is wrong- in 2041 is correct.
I hope it is clear to you.
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The graph depicts the birth and death rates of gone and upcoming years. It is very despairing to see that death rates are increasing but almost have a same rate in between 2041’s and 2101’s. On the contrary , birth rates have a fall after 1981. Highest birth rate was recorded in 1961. According to the graph death and birth rate will be same in 2041. After 2041, the rate of death rate will be higher than birth rate. Since birth and death rate determine the size of population. Hopefully , death rate may become lower than birth rate in upcoming years.
Error Analysis:
1. You need a lot of practice before the final exam. Paraphrazing is incomplete. The introduction is confusing. You did not include any percentage or any other form of comparison.
2. the years 2041 and 2101 are yet to come, so we will talk about it in the future tense.
3. Focus on the error analysis of other readers’ answers.
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A clear cut comparison between the birth and death rates per 1000 people in New Zealand from 1901 till now and its projection till 2101 is depicted in the given line graph.
Overall, it is clear that though the birth rate was higher in New Zealand till now, in future, the trend is set to reverse.
It is clear from the chart that in 1901, the birth rate stood higher than the death rate, and this was just over 20 per 1000 population, when compared to fewer than 10 in case of deaths. By around 1965, the birth rate rose to over 65, which was the highest ever recorded in the given period. Then after the rate is seen declining irregularly, and at present, it is just over 50 per 1000 people. On the other hand, the death rate showed almost a gradual growth to reach around 30, by this time.
Turning to the estimation of deaths, it is expected to rise further and would overtake the rate of births by 2041. It would be the highest in both 2061 and 2081 (almost 60 per 1000) and is projected to settle at around 55 by the end of the period. At the same time, the birth rate is anticipated to slip further and would ultimately settle by about 45.
Error Analysis:
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2. You have exceeded the prescribed word limit.
3. You write impressively but, do not unnecessarily stretch your sentences.
Ans. The graph shows changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand since 1901 and
forecasts trends till 2101.Between 1901 and 2041, the birth rate has been consistently higher than
the death rate. It stood at 20000 in 1901, at the start of this period and started increasing
gradually after that. It reached to its peak of around 65000 in 1961. Since then, the birth rate has
fluctuated between 50000 and 60000. It is expected to decline in the coming years, reaching
approximately 42000 by 2101.In contrast, the death rate stood at around 10000 in 1901 and has
increased steadily after that. It is expected to rise strikingly from 2021 before leveling off to
approximately 60000 between 2061 and 2081. The graph indicates a slight decline in deaths in
the year 2101.The graph shows a huge gap between birth rate and death rate from 1961 to 2001.
However, this gap is expected to reduce in the later years. Overall, as opposed to the prevailing
trends, the death rate will be reversed and will be more than the birth rate in the later part of this
century.
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The graph shows changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand since 1901 and forecasts until 2101
Between 1901 and the present day the birth rate has been consistently higher than the death rate . It stood at 20,000 at the start of this period and increased to a peak of 66,000 in 1961 . Since then the rate has fluctuated between 50-65 thousand and it is expected to decline slowly to around 45000 births by the end of the century
In contrast the death rate startedbelow 10000 and has increased steadily until present time . This increase is expected to be more rapid between 2021 and 2051 when the rate will probably level off at around 60000 before dropping slightly in 2101
Overall these opposing trends mean that the death rate will probably overtake the birth rate in around 2041 and large gap between the two levels will be reversed in the later part to this century
Error Analysis:
1. Essayshout gives you 5 out of 5 marks.
2. Make a habit of putting a full stop after the sentence ends.
ok mam
because we have to analyse the statement thath’s why u are saying expected!!!
No, हम वहां साल 2041 की बात कर रहे हैं जो कि अभी तक आया नहीं है| इसलिए हमने कहा – expected- मतलब हम ऐसी उम्मीद करते हैं |
The line graph below shows changes in the birth and death rates in New
Zealand since 1901 and forecast until 2101. It is clearly observed that the birth rates is at the peak whereas the death rate is much lower than the birth rate.The death rate starts from the period 10,000 and birth rate from 20,000.There is a huge gap between the death rates from the years 2001 till 2101.it has increased steadily.Both the birth rates and the death rates are equal in the year 2041.To conclude, these opposing trends mean that the death rate might overtake the birth rate around 2041 and the huge difference between the two levels may reverse after that.
Error Analysis:
1. Essayshout gives you 3 out of 5 marks.
2. Read the sample answer carefully.
3. Correct this sentence- ‘Both the birth rates and the death rates are equal in the year 2041’. They are expected to be equal in the year 2041. Can you give me the reason why I have used ‘expected’here?
4. Always read your answer twice before submitting.
The provided line graph shows the changes in the birth and the death rate in New Zealand since 1901 and forecast until 2101.
From the graph, it is clearly evidant that both birth and death rate were increasing from 1901.But in 1961, birth rate was approximately 66000 and it had reduced to 40000 in 2101.There has been a wide gap between birth and death rate over the period 1941 to 2021.Both birth and death rates were almost same in the period between 2021-2041.
In short, death rate might overtake the birth rate in coming years. As a result of decreasing the population of New Zealand.
Error Analysis:
1. You need a lot of practice before the final exam.
2. the year 2101 is yet to come, so we will talk about it in the future tense.
3. Focus on the error analysis of other readers’ answers.
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The graph depicts the information about changes in the death and birth rates from 1901 until 2101 in Newzealand.
According to the graph the birth rate has increased steadily over 1901 to present day.It peaked to 66000 in 1961 and then fluctuates many times .It declines further from 2041 till 2101.
In contrast to this the death rate in 1901 is 10000 which is lower than the birth rate .Then it fluctuates several time.
In 2021 it seems that death and birth rate both are almost equal which is good as equal birth rate and death rate indicates balance in population.
Overall the opposing trend means that death will be higher than the birth rate after 2021and the large gap will be reversed in later part of the country.
Instead of fluctuates write fluctuated.
2041 is yet to come, so we will talk about it in future tense- it may decline.
In 2021, it seems that BOTH death and birth rate….
later part of the CENTURY.
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